Hi gang,<br><br>I did some work on the "title" page of the Drupal Cookbook today...<br><br><a href="http://drupal.org/handbook/customization/tutorials/beginners-cookbook">http://drupal.org/handbook/customization/tutorials/beginners-cookbook</a><br>
<br>I just jumped in, but now I'm seeing some questions I'd like to ask the group.<br><br>The book is written in a very strong "I" voice. Who is it? I couldn't quite tell from the revisions. I'd respectfully like to tell that person that I'd like to put some editing work in.<br>
<br>Also, it seems to me like the "I" voice should be removed. That doesn't fit the style guide and it seems kind of weird, especially since those pages don't have authors anyway.<br><br>Another thing that is weird... the Cookbook is nested under "Beyond the Basics" but it is also specifically referred to as "For beginners."<br>
<br>If there were plans to retire or replace the "Cookbook" -- I don't want to waste time. But otherwise, I'd be happy to put some more work into it.<br><br>I'd be interested to feedback on the work that I did today on the first page. <br>
<a href="http://drupal.org/handbook/customization/tutorials/beginners-cookbook">http://drupal.org/handbook/customization/tutorials/beginners-cookbook</a><br><br>I left pretty good notes in the log, and of course you could dif it. I changed the order of things, mostly took stuff out. The place where I added the most was in the terms definition section. I think giving some meet there is helpful, especially for beginners, in lays an important foundation.<br>
<br>Thanks,<br><br>shai<br>