[drupal-devel] [task] Improvement to help text on "access control" page

[nysus]

Issue status update for 
http://drupal.org/node/27062
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 Project:      Drupal
 Version:      4.6.0
 Component:    user.module
 Category:     tasks
 Priority:     minor
 Assigned to:  nysus
 Reported by:  nysus
 Updated by:   nysus
 Status:       patch
 Attachment:   http://drupal.org/files/issues/user_20.patch (2.2 KB)

Here's a second draft.  A bit shorter.  It also removes some passive
language.




nysus



Previous comments:
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Tue, 19 Jul 2005 17:01:03 +0000 : nysus

Attachment: http://drupal.org/files/issues/user_19.patch (2.22 KB)

Improves readability; gets rid of technical jargon; provides concrete
example; provides suggestions for how permissions can be used.  See
attached.