[development] Usability improvement: Clearer language in e-mail sent to new accounts

[Steve Dondley]

> Actually, I like everything but this line.  It seems to have a narrow
> focus.

Yes, that was an oversite on my part I will change that last line. 
I've found a couple of other typos/and wordy stuff that I will fix.

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> Should the documentation team consider this revised email?

I will roll a patch and send a note to that mailing list.

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> Nic
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