[documentation] URGENT: Please review upgrade tutorial instructions

[Kobus Myburgh]

I doubt that I have write access there. I haven't explicitly asked for write access, so I doubt I would have.

I have fixed the first page (note particularly the yellow block - if this is okay. I will fix the rest as well).

http://drupal.org/upgrade/basic-steps-via-GUI 

Regards,

Kobus


>>> kieran at civicspacelabs.org 12/1/2005 9:35:14 AM >>>
Do you have write access to Drupal.org?

If you can upload them, go for it.

Kieran
On Nov 30, 2005, at 11:30 PM, Kobus Myburgh wrote:

> Wouldn't it be better to have those images located on Drupal org?
>
> Regards,
>
> Kobus
>
>
>>>> kieran at civicspacelabs.org 12/1/2005 9:26:24 AM >>>
>
> On Nov 30, 2005, at 11:18 PM, Kobus Myburgh wrote:
>
>> I can make some of the changes if you wish? If you can tell me what
>> the exact URL of the images SHOULD be, I can also fix the images
>> problems?
>
> http://civicspacelabs.org/home/upgrade/basic 
>
> The image links are there from the original.  But they might be
> slightly corrupted on that site.
>
> Kieran
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Kobus
>>
>>
>>>>> kieran at civicspacelabs.org 12/1/2005 9:12:20 AM >>>
>> Thanks for the feedback.  If anyone can make this changes I'd like to
>> review them.
>>
>> Kieran
>> On Nov 30, 2005, at 10:50 PM, Kobus Myburgh wrote:
>>
>>> Kieran,
>>>
>>> First of all: Great work!
>>>
>>> * I have the same font inconsistencies issues than the others and
>>> all pages with images in them have at least one missing.
>>>
>>> * Also, why are so many of the links duplicated? [1] This is a bit
>>> strange to me.
>>>
>>> * In the yellow block in the basic steps via GUI [2], you have
>>> this: "*** If you are upgrading from a version of Drupal that is
>>> older than Drupal 4.5 or older, then...". That sentence is
>>> incorrect. How about simply: "*** If you are upgrading from a
>>> version older than Drupal 4.5, then..."
>>>
>>> * This exact same yellow block also needs some spacing to make it
>>> more readible. This is also holds for other places with this yellow
>>> box [3][5].
>>>
>>> * 3. If you are performing any of these upgrade. You do not need to
>>> upgrade your database: 4.5.0 to 4.5.# (Believe that should be
>>> 4.5.x? Or 4.5.3? [4] This possible problem occurs on several places
>>> on this page.
>>>
>>> * I suggest that all blockquoted text (code or blockquote, anyways)
>>> be made the same as here [6]. It stands out nicely with the bold
>>> inside the block.
>>>
>>> * Inconsistencies in bold text, as described above here too: [7].
>>>
>>> * [7][8][9][10]: These pages have some comments that can be
>>> removed, I believe. Also a lot of the pages after that, but I see
>>> this will be a lot of pages, so I won't list them all here.
>>>
>>> * [8][9]: Are these pages still necessary? Can't they be deleted? A
>>> lot of other pages too - are they still relevant? Not a technical
>>> guru, so I won't know, but this page [11] might not be relevant in
>>> its entirety anymore.
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>>
>>> Kobus
>>>
>>> [1]
>>> Copying your live site to a test site | (Command-Line Version)
>>> Basic Upgrade Steps | (Command-Line Version) | (No Database update)
>>> Optional Configuration Steps
>>> Testing your newly upgraded site
>>> Upgrade Finished!
>>> Copy your test site to your live site | (Command-Line Version)
>>>
>>> Continue to Copying Your Live Site to a Test Site
>>> Jump to Basic Upgrade Steps
>>>
>>> Copy your live site to a test site(GUI version)
>>> Basic Upgrade Steps (GUI version)
>>> Optional Configuration Steps
>>> Testing Your Newly Upgraded Site
>>> Upgrade Finished!
>>> Copy your test site to a live site (GUI Version)
>>>
>>> [2] http://drupal.org/upgrade/basic-steps-via-GUI 
>>> [3] http://drupal.org/upgrade/basic-steps-via-command-line 
>>> [4] http://drupal.org/upgrade/upgrading-the-database 
>>> [5] http://drupal.org/upgrade/upgrading-without-a-db-upgrade 
>>> [6] http://drupal.org/upgrade/testing-the-new-site 
>>> [7] http://drupal.org/node/30699 
>>> [8] http://drupal.org/node/505 
>>> [9] http://drupal.org/node/269 
>>> [10] http://drupal.org/node/271 
>>> [11] http://drupal.org/node/2602 
>>>
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