[drupal-docs] Drupal Newsletter #5 - Draft 1

[Boris Mann]

On 30-Sep-05, at 6:45 PM, Charlie Lowe wrote:

>> No permanent agenda has been made yet, but it seems we will be
>> discussing three important issues that are centralized around the  
>> code
>> (release cycle, new features), the infrastructure (the new hardware,
>> the new infra team) and the community (promotion of Drupal, starting
>> the foundation).
>>
>
> I think you could omit "that are centralized around" and use a  
> colon after issues. Otherwise, it sounds like there are three  
> important issues that are not being listed here but are centralized  
> around those three things.

And add to "the community (promotion of Drupal, starting the  
foundation, revamping the module hosting and display)".

Also, "no permanent agenda" sounds bad -- just point to the link on  
Drupal.org and say something like "Watch the page on drupal.org for  
the latest updates on the agenda. We will be discussing a variety of  
items centralized are the code...."

>
>> So even when you
>> are not attending the Euro-OSCON, there is a lot to do in Amsterdam
>> and you will meet with all your favorite Drupal coders as well.
>>
>
> "So even when not attending Euro-OSCON, you can enjoy Amsterdam and  
> meet with fellow Drupal coders."

And please also mention BarCamp Amsterdam (http://www.barcamp.org/ 
index.cgi?BarCampAmsterdam), taking place directly afterwards.

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