[documentation] renewed request: few small texts for themegarden. please?

[Boerland, Bert]

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good start, just a couple of changes

> Drupal is a computer program that runs on a world wide web server and

"world wide web server" seems odd and very old. just plain webserver will do imho

> provides a means for managing and publishing content. Collectively,
> this functionality is called a Content Management System, or CMS. The

now here it starts. i'm not the guy to rebranded everything with 9moile high buzzwords, butDrupal always presented itself as a ContenT Management Framework instead of System. This might sound like nickpicking, but it really is a great difference. I would prefere Framework

> content might be web log (blog) entries, articles, events, discussion
> forums, resumes or recipes. 

and add here than something like "This flexability is what is differs from Content Management Systems"

> Drupal allows the site maintainers and
> content authors to focus on content, not programming or html markup.

"... ,not on programming or difficult layout with HTML"

> Drupal's theming system allows a web site look to be changed with
> "theme" plug-ins. This Theme Garden showcases the richness and variety

"This Themegarden showscases some of..."

> of the Drupal themes available. More information on Drupal can be
> found at http://drupal.org

Hope my changes make sense, but anyhow great text!