[documentation] URGENT: Please review upgrade tutorial instructions

[Kobus Myburgh]

I can make some of the changes if you wish? If you can tell me what the exact URL of the images SHOULD be, I can also fix the images problems?

Regards,

Kobus


>>> kieran at civicspacelabs.org 12/1/2005 9:12:20 AM >>>
Thanks for the feedback.  If anyone can make this changes I'd like to  
review them.

Kieran
On Nov 30, 2005, at 10:50 PM, Kobus Myburgh wrote:

> Kieran,
>
> First of all: Great work!
>
> * I have the same font inconsistencies issues than the others and  
> all pages with images in them have at least one missing.
>
> * Also, why are so many of the links duplicated? [1] This is a bit  
> strange to me.
>
> * In the yellow block in the basic steps via GUI [2], you have  
> this: "*** If you are upgrading from a version of Drupal that is  
> older than Drupal 4.5 or older, then...". That sentence is  
> incorrect. How about simply: "*** If you are upgrading from a  
> version older than Drupal 4.5, then..."
>
> * This exact same yellow block also needs some spacing to make it  
> more readible. This is also holds for other places with this yellow  
> box [3][5].
>
> * 3. If you are performing any of these upgrade. You do not need to  
> upgrade your database: 4.5.0 to 4.5.# (Believe that should be  
> 4.5.x? Or 4.5.3? [4] This possible problem occurs on several places  
> on this page.
>
> * I suggest that all blockquoted text (code or blockquote, anyways)  
> be made the same as here [6]. It stands out nicely with the bold  
> inside the block.
>
> * Inconsistencies in bold text, as described above here too: [7].
>
> * [7][8][9][10]: These pages have some comments that can be  
> removed, I believe. Also a lot of the pages after that, but I see  
> this will be a lot of pages, so I won't list them all here.
>
> * [8][9]: Are these pages still necessary? Can't they be deleted? A  
> lot of other pages too - are they still relevant? Not a technical  
> guru, so I won't know, but this page [11] might not be relevant in  
> its entirety anymore.
>
> Regards,
>
> Kobus
>
> [1]
> Copying your live site to a test site | (Command-Line Version)
> Basic Upgrade Steps | (Command-Line Version) | (No Database update)
> Optional Configuration Steps
> Testing your newly upgraded site
> Upgrade Finished!
> Copy your test site to your live site | (Command-Line Version)
>
> Continue to Copying Your Live Site to a Test Site
> Jump to Basic Upgrade Steps
>
> Copy your live site to a test site(GUI version)
> Basic Upgrade Steps (GUI version)
> Optional Configuration Steps
> Testing Your Newly Upgraded Site
> Upgrade Finished!
> Copy your test site to a live site (GUI Version)
>
> [2] http://drupal.org/upgrade/basic-steps-via-GUI 
> [3] http://drupal.org/upgrade/basic-steps-via-command-line 
> [4] http://drupal.org/upgrade/upgrading-the-database 
> [5] http://drupal.org/upgrade/upgrading-without-a-db-upgrade 
> [6] http://drupal.org/upgrade/testing-the-new-site 
> [7] http://drupal.org/node/30699 
> [8] http://drupal.org/node/505 
> [9] http://drupal.org/node/269 
> [10] http://drupal.org/node/271 
> [11] http://drupal.org/node/2602 
>
>
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