[documentation] URGENT: Please review upgrade tutorial instructions

[Kieran Lal]

On Nov 30, 2005, at 11:18 PM, Kobus Myburgh wrote:

> I can make some of the changes if you wish? If you can tell me what  
> the exact URL of the images SHOULD be, I can also fix the images  
> problems?

http://civicspacelabs.org/home/upgrade/basic

The image links are there from the original.  But they might be  
slightly corrupted on that site.

Kieran
>
> Regards,
>
> Kobus
>
>
>>>> kieran at civicspacelabs.org 12/1/2005 9:12:20 AM >>>
> Thanks for the feedback.  If anyone can make this changes I'd like to
> review them.
>
> Kieran
> On Nov 30, 2005, at 10:50 PM, Kobus Myburgh wrote:
>
>> Kieran,
>>
>> First of all: Great work!
>>
>> * I have the same font inconsistencies issues than the others and
>> all pages with images in them have at least one missing.
>>
>> * Also, why are so many of the links duplicated? [1] This is a bit
>> strange to me.
>>
>> * In the yellow block in the basic steps via GUI [2], you have
>> this: "*** If you are upgrading from a version of Drupal that is
>> older than Drupal 4.5 or older, then...". That sentence is
>> incorrect. How about simply: "*** If you are upgrading from a
>> version older than Drupal 4.5, then..."
>>
>> * This exact same yellow block also needs some spacing to make it
>> more readible. This is also holds for other places with this yellow
>> box [3][5].
>>
>> * 3. If you are performing any of these upgrade. You do not need to
>> upgrade your database: 4.5.0 to 4.5.# (Believe that should be
>> 4.5.x? Or 4.5.3? [4] This possible problem occurs on several places
>> on this page.
>>
>> * I suggest that all blockquoted text (code or blockquote, anyways)
>> be made the same as here [6]. It stands out nicely with the bold
>> inside the block.
>>
>> * Inconsistencies in bold text, as described above here too: [7].
>>
>> * [7][8][9][10]: These pages have some comments that can be
>> removed, I believe. Also a lot of the pages after that, but I see
>> this will be a lot of pages, so I won't list them all here.
>>
>> * [8][9]: Are these pages still necessary? Can't they be deleted? A
>> lot of other pages too - are they still relevant? Not a technical
>> guru, so I won't know, but this page [11] might not be relevant in
>> its entirety anymore.
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Kobus
>>
>> [1]
>> Copying your live site to a test site | (Command-Line Version)
>> Basic Upgrade Steps | (Command-Line Version) | (No Database update)
>> Optional Configuration Steps
>> Testing your newly upgraded site
>> Upgrade Finished!
>> Copy your test site to your live site | (Command-Line Version)
>>
>> Continue to Copying Your Live Site to a Test Site
>> Jump to Basic Upgrade Steps
>>
>> Copy your live site to a test site(GUI version)
>> Basic Upgrade Steps (GUI version)
>> Optional Configuration Steps
>> Testing Your Newly Upgraded Site
>> Upgrade Finished!
>> Copy your test site to a live site (GUI Version)
>>
>> [2] http://drupal.org/upgrade/basic-steps-via-GUI
>> [3] http://drupal.org/upgrade/basic-steps-via-command-line
>> [4] http://drupal.org/upgrade/upgrading-the-database
>> [5] http://drupal.org/upgrade/upgrading-without-a-db-upgrade
>> [6] http://drupal.org/upgrade/testing-the-new-site
>> [7] http://drupal.org/node/30699
>> [8] http://drupal.org/node/505
>> [9] http://drupal.org/node/269
>> [10] http://drupal.org/node/271
>> [11] http://drupal.org/node/2602
>>
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