[documentation] Welcome text improvement.
Robert Castelo
robert.castelo at cortextcommunications.com
Sun Apr 30 12:56:07 UTC 2006
Some ideas, mainly just making the text more concise and (I think)
easier to read by cutting down on verbiage and being clearer about what
each step is...
Change:
"The following steps will help you to start enjoying your new site:"
to
"4 Steps to start enjoying your new site:"
Change:
"To begin, create the first account. This account will have full
administration rights and will allow you to configure your website."
to
"1. <strong>Create administration account</strong> <br />
The first account you <link>create</link> will have full administration
rights and will allow you to configure your website."
Change:
"Once logged in, visit the administration section. This allows you to
make customizations to your site, such as changing your website's
configuration."
to
"2. <strong>Go to Administration</strong><br />
Once logged in, visit the <link>administration</link> section to
configure your website."
Change:
"Next, visit the module list and enable features which suit your
website's needs. You may also find additional modules in the Drupal
Modules downloads section."
to
"3. <strong>Configure modules</strong><br />
Next, visit the <link>module list</link> and enable features which suit
your website's needs. You may also find additional modules in the
Drupal Modules downloads section."
Change:
"To change your website's "look and feel," visit the themes section.
You may choose from one of the included themes, download additional
themes from the Drupal downloads section or modify a theme to suit your
needs."
to
"4. <strong>Configure themes</strong><br />
To change your website's "look and feel," visit the <link>themes
section</link>. You may choose from one of the included themes,
download additional themes from the Drupal downloads section or modify
a theme to suit your needs."
Course, this would be much more useful if it was in a block, so the
user didn't need to keep going back to the home page to read the next
step.
Hope this helps ;-)
Best regards,
Robert
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