Sorry, I didn't finish this bit:
- The "feature rich" section seems to mention Drupal's modularity as a side-effect... in the last brochure this was a very important section covering one full "flap". It illustrated effectively how many features, which would be hardcoded and/or inflexible in a traditional CMS, are removable and customizable in Drupal. Now it's more like "yeah, you can turn stuff off if you don't like it, and modules have something to do with it". This hardly describes what Drupal modules are and the way they can hook into every aspect of the CMS and integrate every feature with every other feature, or how most features (like the profile module) are built as a flexible system rather than a fixed set of functions. While underlying architecture is not directly important for end-users, it is important for customizability and flexibility. If you don't include a big "architecture" section, at the very least you should
... explain in more detail what modules are and how they are used to build a Drupal site. Steven