Low level would be great, high level suggestions are welcome as long as they won't delay the Saturday release.

Robin

On 4/13/06, Jason Flatt drupal@oadae.net wrote:

On Thursday 13 April 2006 05:42 am, Robin Monks wrote:

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Unfortunately, due to problems encountered with simplenews I was unable to send the draft via the usual means.

Attached are OpenDocument and HTML versions of the draft.

Please check it over for any errors and send any errors to both lists (I know, it's painful, but the double posting is required so the translators can make any necessary changes as they translate). If all goes well this will go out Saturday.

Thanks for your effort! Robin

For my information, to what level of detail do you want feedback? Are you looking for high-overview information (does it belong or not, is it relevant, etc.), or low-detailed information (grammatical and syntactical)?

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